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Original: 6/29/2009 10:53 PM
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Monday, June 29, 2009

The Given Things

 Threading the earth
With persistent memories
That shade a marble sky,

That cool stained glass of long ago,
Glowing and fresh in little saplings
That sleep, knotted at the roots.

It never needed silly dreams,
Vague songs with crystal spools
Of icy taste and twang,
Steamed cold when plucked
From the stores of the mind.

A forgotten loom was in those shadows
That raced darkness up the wall
Weaving in a teetering dance.

Spring, summer, winter, fall;
Always but a few memories
As they tangle in the grove,
Where words still court them.
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beautiful peom, as usual. you are very tallented.


oh! i put up the story so you can read it. its rather short. :]

Posted 6/30/2009 10:15 AM by indie_bindi - reply

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Something sweet.

I love this poem. And you thought my poem was thought provoking!! This one that you have written has soul written all over it Cathy.

Posted 6/30/2009 7:15 PM by ZSA_MD Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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@indie_bindi - Thanks! And I can't wait to read what else you might write in the future. I did find you on a writing blogring, after all.



@ZSA_MD - A worthy sacrifice, that I should have to copy and paste that little white rectangle in a word processor just to read your kind words. It does have a way of releasing happy emotions, though, with the trouble I put myself through. :] Yes, I'm rambling again. Sometimes the most wonderful things are buried deep beneath good souls other than one's own inner flow. Thanks so much!

Posted 6/30/2009 7:40 PM by puiyenchui - reply

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Such a bittersweet picture you've painted here. A mesmerizing blend of richness. Very nice.
Posted 6/30/2009 7:55 PM by zionlover Xanga True Member - reply

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i dont know if i'll post more writing up. i think you're one of my only writer friends on here. i may slip in a poem or two.  a week though. :]


tanks for the commentary! really helpful.

Posted 6/30/2009 8:13 PM by indie_bindi - reply

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I don't know what happened Cathy. I wrote a long comment, but I can't see it now in the comment box; can you?
Posted 6/30/2009 8:41 PM by ZSA_MD Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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@ZSA_MD - That's a glitch in the layout that I'm currently using. I can still see it if I take it off the Internet and paste it elsewhere. It's most likely because the font is white, and Xanga made their Minis white by default. I usually don't get very many Minis (thanks so much, once again), so I usually don't worry about it. This just reminds me to poke around the Internet for another layout. Meanwhile, don't worry about not getting your message through. :]



@zionlover - Your understanding of my words makes writing so much more worthwhile. Thank you!



@indie_bindi - Yay! I can't wait, then. :]

Posted 6/30/2009 9:12 PM by puiyenchui - reply

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ugh. i mean it seems awesome and all being curvy, but its really not. tall skinny indie boys usually dont go for short curvy brown girls. i dont know how the heck i ended up with mine, but if he leaves the chance of me getting another is slim to none.  i'm doing this for myself...  but i'm also doing it for the mens. cant forget 'em. ;]
Posted 6/30/2009 9:21 PM by indie_bindi - reply

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@indie_bindi - You seem to be very sure of yourself, which is good. :]



I don't think I've had a back-and-forth conversation in a long time! I used to go to people's sites to respond to the comments they had posted on my site, but that was only before the REPLY button came into being. Ah, good times.

Posted 6/30/2009 9:44 PM by puiyenchui - reply


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